Here’s something writers don’t always want to hear: just because you think you’re writing a romance doesn’t mean readers will agree. Just because you have a dragon on your cover doesn’t automatically make your book an epic fantasy.
Genre isn’t a hat you put on your manuscript after it’s finished. It’s not a marketing category you pick from a dropdown menu on Amazon to see what sticks.
Genre is the fundamental DNA of your story. It is a promise you make to your reader the moment they see your cover and read your book’s description. It sets up a powerful set of expectations about the emotional journey you are about to take them on. If you break that promise, you don’t just get a bad review. You get a confused, frustrated, and betrayed reader (the very person you needed to champion your work). And you will never find your audience if you are consistently promising one experience while delivering another.
A Cautionary Tale: The Fantasy Romance That Wasn’t
I want to tell you a story. A while back, a writer submitted a manuscript for a beta read. On my intake form, a long, detailed document designed to get to the heart of a story, they listed the genre as Romance and the subgenre as Fantasy.
Great. I knew what to expect. As a reader, I was primed for a story where the central plot would revolve around the development of a romantic relationship, all set against a fantastical backdrop. I was ready for the “meet-cute,” the rising tension, the obstacles keeping the lovers apart, and the eventual emotional payoff, all seasoned with a bit of magic or world-building.
I started reading. By Chapter 3, I was curious. By Chapter 6, I was concerned. By Chapter 11, I was completely lost, still trying to figure out who the main romantic lead was even supposed to be. There were several potential candidates, but none of their relationships with the protagonist formed the core of the plot. The story was being driven by something else entirely. On top of that, the “fantasy” element was so light it was nearly transparent. There was no magic system, no clash of fantastical races, no sense of a world different from our own beyond a few vaguely futuristic technologies.
This wasn’t a badly written book. In fact, the prose was clean and the pacing was good. But it wasn’t a fantasy romance. It was a dystopian novel with a romantic subplot.
This distinction is everything. The author had confidently labeled it, planned a trilogy around it, and was even working on a prequel (all based on a fundamental misunderstanding of what they had written). They were aiming to sell a love story to romance readers, who would have been bitterly disappointed by the lack of focus on the relationship. They were also trying to attract fantasy readers, who would have found the world-building thin and uninspired. Meanwhile, the actual audience (dystopian fiction fans who love high-stakes societal conflict with a side of romance) would never have even found the book, because it wasn’t being marketed to them.
That’s why my intake forms are so rigorous. That’s why I ask writers to define their audience and then describe their story. The contrast between those answers tells me everything. It helps me see the disconnect. It allows me to step in and say, “Here’s what you think you’re writing. Here’s what I’m actually reading.” Not to discourage, but to clarify. Because you won’t find your audience until you know who you’re writing for.
How to Find Your True Genre: A 4-Step Reality Check
So, how do you avoid this trap? You have to be willing to get brutally honest with your own work. Instead of just slapping on a label, run your manuscript through this four-step diagnostic.
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Identify Your A-Plot
Every story has multiple plotlines. The A-plot is the main storyline; it’s the engine of your book. The B-plot (and C-plot, etc.) is secondary; it adds texture and depth but is not the primary driver. Your genre is determined by your A-plot.
Look at your manuscript and ask: If I removed this plotline, would the book fall apart?- ♦ In my cautionary tale, if you removed the romantic elements, you would still have a story about a young person fighting a repressive society. It would be a less compelling story, perhaps, but the core narrative would remain.
- ♦ However, if you removed the dystopian conflict, the characters would have no reason to interact, no shared struggle, and no plot. The romantic “story” would evaporate because it had no foundation of its own.
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Map the Dominant Emotion
Genre is an emotional promise. What is the primary feeling you are trying to evoke in your reader throughout the book? You can’t be everything to everyone in a single story. Pinpoint the dominant emotional arc.- ♦ Are you building romantic and sexual tension, leading to the satisfying release of a “happily ever after”?
- ♦ Are you building suspense and anxiety, making the reader’s heart pound with every page turn?
- ♦ Are you building dread and fear, creating an oppressive atmosphere where the reader feels as unsafe as the character?
- ♦ Are you building wonder and awe, immersing the reader in a new world with a rich sense of discovery?
- ♦ Are you building curiosity and intrigue, compelling the reader to piece together a puzzle alongside the detective?
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Read the Comp Titles in Your Target Aisle
Go to a bookstore or browse an online retailer. Find the section where you think your book belongs. Read the back cover copy of five bestsellers in that genre. Do they sound like your book? Do they make the same kind of promises? These are your “comp titles” (comparative books that help position your own). If you’re writing a “romance” but the blurbs for the top 100 romance novels are all about the meet-cute, the forced proximity, and the emotional angst of the central couple, and your blurb would have to be about your protagonist leading a rebellion… you are in the wrong aisle. Go over to the Sci-Fi/Fantasy section and see if you feel more at home. This isn’t about changing your story; it’s about finding where it truly belongs. -
Send in the Litmus Test (Your Beta Reader)
This is the most important step because it takes the diagnosis out of your biased hands. You are too close to your work to be objective. Your beta reader is your first real audience member, and their fresh perspective is priceless.
But you have to ask the right questions. Don’t lead the witness by asking, “Did it feel like a thriller to you?” Instead, ask open-ended diagnostic questions before you tell them what you think the genre is:- ♦ “Without looking at my summary, how would you describe this book to a friend in one sentence?”
- ♦ “What question did you feel most desperate to have answered by the end of the book?”
- ♦ “Which storyline felt like the most important one to you?”
- ♦ “If you had to put this on a bookstore shelf, what other three books would you place next to it?”
Genre Promises: A Basic Field Guide
After you’ve run the 4-step check, use this guide to see where your manuscript lands. This is your reference sheet for interpreting your results.
Romance
- The Promise: You will experience the emotional journey of two (or more) people falling in love and achieving a committed relationship.
- Reader Expectations: The central love story is the main plot, not a subplot. It must end with a Happily Ever After (HEA) or a Happy For Now (HFN).
Fantasy
- The Promise: You will be transported to a world fundamentally different from our own, often involving magic.
- Reader Expectations: Detailed world-building is essential. The stakes are usually large-scale. The plot often follows a heroic quest.
Science Fiction
- The Promise: You will explore the human condition through a speculative lens, examining the impact of science and technology.
- Reader Expectations: A core “what if” question drives the narrative. The science/technology is a consistent and meaningful part of the world.
Thriller
- The Promise: You will experience a fast-paced, high-stakes ride that leaves you breathless.
- Reader Expectations: The pacing is relentless. The protagonist is in near-constant peril. A “ticking clock” creates urgency.
Mystery
- The Promise: You will be presented with an intriguing puzzle that will be satisfyingly solved.
- Reader Expectations: A central crime/question is introduced early. The conclusion features a big reveal where the culprit is unmasked.
Horror
- The Promise: You will be scared. You will feel dread, terror, and disgust.
- Reader Expectations: The primary goal is to evoke fear. The atmosphere is unsettling, and the protagonist is often powerless against a monstrous force.
A Note on Popular Genre Blends
“But wait,” you might be saying, “my book is a mix!” You’re right. Most modern fiction is. Genre blending is common, but the same rules apply: one genre almost always drives the A-plot. Understanding that hierarchy is the key.
- Fantasy Romance (romantasy) vs. Fantasy with a Romantic Subplot: This is a crucial distinction. Fantasy Romance/romantasy promises a romance first (the relationship is the A-plot) set in a fantasy world; it must deliver an HEA/HFN. Fantasy with a Romantic Subplot promises a world-saving plot first, where the romance is the B-plot. Knowing which you wrote determines whether your primary audience is romance readers or fantasy readers.
- Urban Fantasy: The Promise: The supernatural is real, and it lives down your street. Reader Expectations: It takes the rules and beings of fantasy (magic, vampires, fae) and drops them into a recognizable, modern-day setting. The conflict often comes from the clash between our mundane world and the hidden magical one.
- Science Fantasy: The Promise: An epic adventure that uses the tools of both sci-fi and fantasy without being strictly bound by either. Reader Expectations: Expect spaceships and swords, laser guns and magic spells. The focus is on the grand adventure and the “rule of cool” more than hard scientific explanation or traditional fantasy lore.
- Sci-Fi Thriller: The Promise: A high-speed, suspenseful race against time where the threat is rooted in science or technology. Reader Expectations: It follows the bone structure of a thriller (ticking clock, high stakes), but the antagonist might be a rogue AI, an alien outbreak, or a piece of tech gone wrong. The core promise is suspense, flavored with sci-fi.
Your Book’s Future Depends On It
Choosing the right genre isn’t about limiting your creativity. It’s about aiming it. It’s a vital act of communication between you and your potential reader. Getting it right ensures that your story (the one you poured your heart and soul into) ends up in the hands of people who are predisposed to love it. Getting it wrong is like inviting a guest for a steak dinner and serving them a bowl of cereal. No matter how good the cereal is, you’ve broken a promise.
So, be ruthless. Be honest. Put your manuscript through the reality check. Figure out what promise you are truly making, and then put a label on the jar that reflects its actual contents.
Your future readers will thank you for it.

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